Sunday, August 12, 2007

Week One Final (??):



4 comments:

werner said...

Joe, could you please re-post the image with the axon. I can't open it in its own window. More comments to follow tonight. Thanks

Joe said...

drawing has been reposted.

werner said...

Joe, you completed the assignment: clear inside/outside, single entry, large space, small space,
zones, transitions (heard that before?). I like the approach to the small space with the OT, the
repetitive relationship of the four walls and the openings. The slight changes from wall to wall,
the layering with the main entry and the GT adds strength and interest. I wished the same rigor
would have to been applied to the rest of the building, but as much as the transitional space and
the zones are satisfying the requirements, the composition misses to resolve the two different
geometries. Next time.

Joe said...

werner,

i guess part of my intent was to keep the focus on the small space, which i envisoned as a gallery. the rest of the spaces i tried to keep very simple (probably too simple based on your comments), so that it would not detract from the interest of the main space. oh well. maybe this is something i can re-visit at some point.